author, your stories are way too good. I know that every character is different and story has its own pace but still I sometimes feels that now the character of fl is not convincing. here only avyaan is making efforts not her. I know she has suffered trauma which no one should get, but I personally think that now she is being too much. you need to open up with your partner but here she is not doing such efforts.... I am not criticizing your work, I will repeat it again that your work is fabulous including this storyline too.....in this story everything is perfect except the current nature of fl....pls do something in this context.
As your honest reader, I just gave my review. but if it hurts you anyhow then I apologise because hurting you or demotivating you was not my intention..... keep writing 😊
2024-11-17
2
Amaryllis
Well ....... I believe u that u won't copy others work because u don't need to /Smile/
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author, your stories are way too good. I know that every character is different and story has its own pace but still I sometimes feels that now the character of fl is not convincing. here only avyaan is making efforts not her. I know she has suffered trauma which no one should get, but I personally think that now she is being too much. you need to open up with your partner but here she is not doing such efforts....
I am not criticizing your work, I will repeat it again that your work is fabulous including this storyline too.....in this story everything is perfect except the current nature of fl....pls do something in this context.
As your honest reader, I just gave my review. but if it hurts you anyhow then I apologise because hurting you or demotivating you was not my intention.....
keep writing 😊
2024-11-17
2
Amaryllis
Well ....... I believe u that u won't copy others work because u don't need to /Smile/
2024-11-13
2
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2024-11-13
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