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Justwriteittoyou

heya author... your writing is too good but i have a suggestion for you... see if u like it other wise u can ignore too hehe ..

so here rather than writing that kook was touching tae n doing things directly, try writing what he actually was doing, this evokes sensualization, be it in action scenes, normal scenes or whatever, for example rather than writing 'jungkook took his time' u can write 'jungkook slowly dragged his finger tips over his waist, coiling it around his torso, pulling him closer. his hands slid further up near the chest, circling around the areola, pinching and pulling...'

rather than 'occasionally applying gentle pressure' u can try 'his lips moved near the clips, tongue tracing the skin pinched, other hand sensually tugging at the clips, taehyung closed his eyes, moisture clustering around his corner of eyes making them red as he felt a wave of dizziness wash him over at the sensation... 'ahhhh koo~'...' something like this

2026-05-03

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Justwriteittoyou

noo why not, u r doing it really great for someone who's written it for first time... and the main thing is it is not non-con but sub consciously consensual, which makes it even more smexyy