hey author I don't really want sound rude but it just that it feels like story isn't moving forward at all and it's really frustrating in every we can see that there is just some moment and in that moment whole chapter for example in this chapter jk is just taking tae to capital and there is just mere conversation and that's it the whole chapter end it just like some moment and every chapter is like that only . don't get me wrong the story is incredible but it would be good if it has some speed or long chapter
2025-08-18
3
Athena♥️🫶
ahhhhh bakit parati nalng nakakabitin🥹🥹
2025-08-17
1
not your buisness
in previous chapter he said he want fix everything he broke is that how he gonna fix everything
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not your buisness
hey author I don't really want sound rude but it just that it feels like story isn't moving forward at all and it's really frustrating in every we can see that there is just some moment and in that moment whole chapter for example in this chapter jk is just taking tae to capital and there is just mere conversation and that's it the whole chapter end it just like some moment and every chapter is like that only . don't get me wrong the story is incredible but it would be good if it has some speed or long chapter
2025-08-18
3
Athena♥️🫶
ahhhhh bakit parati nalng nakakabitin🥹🥹
2025-08-17
1
not your buisness
in previous chapter he said he want fix everything he broke is that how he gonna fix everything
2025-08-17
7