As a reader ik opinion dena tha (no offense just genuine ones)
It's nice but dekho to Keep hooked add unke actions expression with dialogues agr ho skta ha toh kuch images add Krna surroundings ki in between (helps in imagining and keeping hooked) and the most important English translations bhi add kr do jinhe hindi ni aati ha unke liye (noveltoon me different readers ha 😭)
baki overall it's really nice for the first time now I'm going to read further 😆
2026-06-16
0
Noorphans.
The suspense kept me on the edge of my seat! My heart is still racing.
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Ashu~
As a reader ik opinion dena tha (no offense just genuine ones)
It's nice but dekho to Keep hooked add unke actions expression with dialogues
agr ho skta ha toh kuch images add Krna surroundings ki in between (helps in imagining and keeping hooked)
and the most important English translations bhi add kr do jinhe hindi ni aati ha unke liye (noveltoon me different readers ha 😭)
baki overall it's really nice for the first time now I'm going to read further 😆
2026-06-16
0
Noorphans.
The suspense kept me on the edge of my seat! My heart is still racing.
2025-06-13
1
Ashu~
aap chup raho filhaal 🙂💢
2026-06-16
1