It's going good! But, I would just say that, give some space to separate the scenes. Like, with taehyung and then add some space and then add Jungkook's pov. It gets mixed up. But, overall it's going good! Keep it up!
2025-08-06
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Hello /Smile/your story is good don't stop writing
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★ᴄ͢͢͢ʀɪᴍɪɴᴀʟ ɴᴀᴇᴠɪꜱ ⁶⁶⁶★
It's going good! But, I would just say that, give some space to separate the scenes. Like, with taehyung and then add some space and then add Jungkook's pov. It gets mixed up. But, overall it's going good! Keep it up!
2025-08-06
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Hello /Smile/your story is good don't stop writing
2025-08-07
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★ᴄ͢͢͢ʀɪᴍɪɴᴀʟ ɴᴀᴇᴠɪꜱ ⁶⁶⁶★
🤡🍃 What the heck you old uncle!!!
2025-08-06
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