It’s cause your chapters are extremely short so there’s almost no space for anything to even happen during them. A chapter will have one small conversation and then end, so of course the story will barely progress.
2025-10-16
3
nonono😎
ya you should be ,the one who were together you kill one of them 🙂
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Stardust
not really
2026-01-23
1
Starlight🌟
It’s cause your chapters are extremely short so there’s almost no space for anything to even happen during them. A chapter will have one small conversation and then end, so of course the story will barely progress.
2025-10-16
3
nonono😎
ya you should be ,the one who were together you kill one of them 🙂
2025-10-16
2