Cool characters. Especially Sylvia's power to intrude in others' memories feels unique. The character descriptions are pretty lengthy honestly. Anyways, her sister storing up souls of immortals that wish to die is sad. Immortality makes them yearn for death. Life gets boring for them, living forever is definitely a curse. Also, the city people keep going despite the boring life they have. Their interest in art makes much more sense now. Art can never really be mastered. That's definitely true. Your choice of dialogues are great, actually. Anyway, congrats
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Kathir Velan
Cool characters. Especially Sylvia's power to intrude in others' memories feels unique. The character descriptions are pretty lengthy honestly. Anyways, her sister storing up souls of immortals that wish to die is sad. Immortality makes them yearn for death. Life gets boring for them, living forever is definitely a curse. Also, the city people keep going despite the boring life they have. Their interest in art makes much more sense now. Art can never really be mastered. That's definitely true. Your choice of dialogues are great, actually. Anyway, congrats
2026-01-28
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SpokeIsNOTHere
Silvia might be the new love of my life
2026-03-06
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