To author- The theme and the story plot sequence is great but try not using the same phrase again And again It will have a big positive impact for readers and better you know . Your vocab is good too but try simple words as well to make it less"crowded" ,if u understand what I mean.
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To author-
The theme and the story plot sequence is great but try not using the same phrase again And again
It will have a big positive impact for readers and better you know .
Your vocab is good too but try simple words as well to make it less"crowded" ,if u understand what I mean.
Rest is great and thanks a lot for the novel
2026-01-05
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