bro chill I get your point about slow buildup, and I agree it’s important.
At the same time, as a reader, I personally found the TK portions less engaging and interesting compared to the other arcs.
That’s why I mentioned it.I sometimes skip them, but that’s just my personal preference—not a criticism of your effort.
Yeah, I understand what you mean about buildup and slow parts. I wasn’t trying to say it shouldn’t exist.
Just sharing honestly since you asked—no intention to criticize negatively.
I understand your perspective as a writer, and I respect that I am a writer too OK
just chill
2026-03-22
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Andro
Hey, I think there might’ve been a small misunderstanding, so I just wanted to clear it up. I didn’t mean to hurt you at all. I actually shared my thoughts only because you asked for honest feedback, and I felt comfortable being open with you. I tend to be very direct with people I’m comfortable with—whether it’s friends or anyone—so it came out that way. But there was no intention to criticize you personally. I really do respect your work and your effort. I was just sharing my personal reading experience. I hope you didn’t feel bad because of it.
2026-03-22
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Andro
Hey, I just wanted to share some honest feedback. I didn’t mean the entire plot—overall, I really enjoyed the revenge and torture arcs, and Jimin’s character is written really well.
It’s just that, for me personally, the TK parts sometimes feel a bit dragging like I will just scroll up or skip it and slightly disconnected from the main storyline, which made it harder for me to stay engaged.
Of course, I know it’s your story and your creative choice—I’m just sharing my perspective as a reader.
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Andro
bro chill
I get your point about slow buildup, and I agree it’s important.
At the same time, as a reader, I personally found the TK portions less engaging and interesting compared to the other arcs.
That’s why I mentioned it.I sometimes skip them, but that’s just my personal preference—not a criticism of your effort.
Yeah, I understand what you mean about buildup and slow parts. I wasn’t trying to say it shouldn’t exist.
Just sharing honestly since you asked—no intention to criticize negatively.
I understand your perspective as a writer, and I respect that I am a writer too OK
just chill
2026-03-22
2
Andro
Hey, I think there might’ve been a small misunderstanding, so I just wanted to clear it up.
I didn’t mean to hurt you at all. I actually shared my thoughts only because you asked for honest feedback, and I felt comfortable being open with you.
I tend to be very direct with people I’m comfortable with—whether it’s friends or anyone—so it came out that way. But there was no intention to criticize you personally.
I really do respect your work and your effort. I was just sharing my personal reading experience. I hope you didn’t feel bad because of it.
2026-03-22
1
Andro
Hey, I just wanted to share some honest feedback. I didn’t mean the entire plot—overall, I really enjoyed the revenge and torture arcs, and Jimin’s character is written really well.
It’s just that, for me personally, the TK parts sometimes feel a bit dragging like I will just scroll up or skip it and slightly disconnected from the main storyline, which made it harder for me to stay engaged.
Of course, I know it’s your story and your creative choice—I’m just sharing my perspective as a reader.
2026-03-22
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