even though it's the same story which i really really had loved ...but this story is just doesn't feel not ....like you know I feel some dialogue are not correct and grammer too .... just feel wrong
2025-11-09
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mika0613
story is definitely very very veryyy good the original author is the best ...and I'm not saying any bad things to you... so dnt take it in bad way
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mika0613
even though it's the same story which i really really had loved ...but this story is just doesn't feel not ....like you know I feel some dialogue are not correct and grammer too .... just feel wrong
2025-11-09
1
mika0613
story is definitely very very veryyy good the original author is the best ...and I'm not saying any bad things to you... so dnt take it in bad way
2025-11-09
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