authy just an option, can u put more of their dialogues or like actions.of what they r doing rather than writing it as description. It feels like I'm reading a novel. Also the entire chapter just ended with descriptions and nothing further like here it ended with him just going upstairs and laying asher on bed. Just an option not trying to be rude. I apologise if i offend u.
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authy just an option, can u put more of their dialogues or like actions.of what they r doing rather than writing it as description. It feels like I'm reading a novel. Also the entire chapter just ended with descriptions and nothing further like here it ended with him just going upstairs and laying asher on bed. Just an option not trying to be rude. I apologise if i offend u.
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2025-11-15
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