Hi author Veins of obsession is one of my favourite stories and I know this story is sequel of that one but I think this story is a but slow i mean it's story line or character progress is a bit slow I mean no harm please take it as positive criticism
2025-12-26
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Luna
Thank you so much pandu . I am screaming in happiness right now . I will save it and keep it as my wallpaper. 😘😘😘😘 My sweet pandu , my cute pandu , my lovely pandu 😘😘
2025-12-26
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sony(mmdc)🖌️
she want to ask how you know how to eat indian food am i right 👍🏻
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🦋Bhõõmî🦋
Hi author
Veins of obsession is one of my favourite stories and I know this story is sequel of that one but I think this story is a but slow i mean it's story line or character progress is a bit slow
I mean no harm please take it as positive criticism
2025-12-26
1
Luna
Thank you so much pandu . I am screaming in happiness right now . I will save it and keep it as my wallpaper. 😘😘😘😘
My sweet pandu , my cute pandu , my lovely pandu 😘😘
2025-12-26
0
sony(mmdc)🖌️
she want to ask how you know how to eat indian food am i right 👍🏻
2025-12-26
3