i guess this was a good end and happy too even if you did add another ml for bhairavi it would be not satisfying as a reader this is good not perfect as it felt too real to read it didn't feel like a fictional story, my good is perfect so don't be disappointed by my comment the story of bhairavi nice too read..
2026-03-15
10
Delilah
whattttttt!!!!! Author please try to give few more chapters because it's looking like a incomplete ending. Please just make them look like a normal casual couple for once like with all intimacy, lovey dovey stuff. I know it's kinda difficult because of the past but please just try.
2026-03-15
8
𝒀𝒖𝒐𝒏𝒂❥
I like the ending like this.... I already knew the ending so this was better for me than i expected..... and again , your writing skills way amazing Authy ! The way you express every emotions is beautiful.... i did feel the ending was rush and Bhairu forgiving Travis also felt rush to me..... but it's fine , I'm waiting for another story...❤️
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spoliedstar
i guess this was a good end and happy too even if you did add another ml for bhairavi it would be not satisfying as a reader this is good not perfect as it felt too real to read it didn't feel like a fictional story, my good is perfect so don't be disappointed by my comment the story of bhairavi nice too read..
2026-03-15
10
Delilah
whattttttt!!!!! Author please try to give few more chapters because it's looking like a incomplete ending. Please just make them look like a normal casual couple for once like with all intimacy, lovey dovey stuff. I know it's kinda difficult because of the past but please just try.
2026-03-15
8
𝒀𝒖𝒐𝒏𝒂❥
I like the ending like this.... I already knew the ending so this was better for me than i expected.....
and again , your writing skills way amazing Authy ! The way you express every emotions is beautiful.... i did feel the ending was rush and Bhairu forgiving Travis also felt rush to me..... but it's fine , I'm waiting for another story...❤️
2026-03-18
1