and you asked me what are my thoughts on this story. I will say you are doing perfectly fine just need to improve the English but that's not a big deal. just try to proofread your story before posting. this will help alot. overall the storyline is also looking pretty interesting
2025-10-23
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mimi
is it like earthy smell??
2025-10-23
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mimi
and please don't make jimin some helpless little kid who can't even stand for himself in any kind of situation cuz it's the same everywhere😭. its. request
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mimi
and you asked me what are my thoughts on this story. I will say you are doing perfectly fine just need to improve the English but that's not a big deal. just try to proofread your story before posting. this will help alot. overall the storyline is also looking pretty interesting
2025-10-23
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mimi
is it like earthy smell??
2025-10-23
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mimi
and please don't make jimin some helpless little kid who can't even stand for himself in any kind of situation cuz it's the same everywhere😭. its. request
2025-10-23
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