author I really want to say I liked your story from the start but as the story line goes on more than romantic or a arrange marriage story it is becoming that how the female lead have bond with her friends and how she enjoys with them I think you are slightly going of the way plz keep that in your mind in starting it was ok was now she only have time with her friends neither is their any story line for her career nor fl and ml lone life neither there family even interaction between them is getting less and less and i am not telling you that you should change your story line if you have something in mind but if you want to continue with same story like now try to add more fl and ml interaction their thoughts about each other small cute interaction ❤️❤️ that all hope u don't mind me saying all this. Well keep it up and all the best
Comments
AS
author I really want to say I liked your story from the start but as the story line goes on more than romantic or a arrange marriage story it is becoming that how the female lead have bond with her friends and how she enjoys with them I think you are slightly going of the way plz keep that in your mind in starting it was ok was now she only have time with her friends neither is their any story line for her career nor fl and ml lone life neither there family even interaction between them is getting less and less
and i am not telling you that you should change your story line if you have something in mind but if you want to continue with same story like now try to add more fl and ml interaction their thoughts about each other small cute interaction ❤️❤️ that all hope u don't mind me saying all this. Well keep it up and all the best
2026-01-20
0