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🦋⃟👑 𝕶𝖔𝖔𝖐𝖎𝖊 ~❣️

Author, I have something to say. I have read the short story of yours of this cs, and there the things were rushed but the plot was really awesome.
But, one thing that troubles me is that, Vincent didn't deserve to be just a human. I mean he was a dragon, and in his next life—present life—Taehyung gave him his powers back to fight those shadows or whoever, and he again snatched them because he deserved it.
But, in my opinion, I don't think so. Vincent is naive and easily trust anyone. He has been living among the people who have always loved him and cared for him genuinely. He was never shown the outer world to exactly know how it could it be.
His parents had caged him inside the palace on the name of love, to keep him safe, but they never taught him the basic survival skills. He never learned who he exactly was and he shouldn't be hidden.
I don't know if you have changed the plotline from before, but I'm just saying that, its not totally his fault to believe anyone around him because, that's what he has been doing from his birth.
I think even if his dragon instincts are snatched away to punish him due to his sin, then it should be returned to him in the present time and he shouldn't be the meek one anymore. Even if a human he should learn to survive at least.
And... I don't mean to offend you by any means. This is what I've been thinking of over a few days and, I thought to let you know because in anyway, I'm still gonna continue to know what happens next!

2026-06-11

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VICTORY TAE

anyone could misunderstand it, because they are talking about Vincent but they are not sharing it with him. so it's normal to feel alone and neglect and feel an extra wheel.

2026-06-11

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