Dear Author I m looking forward to their storyline nd I really hope that in this story u focus more on sweet moments of the upcoming ml nd fl along with the story plot I really felt like there weren't much chahat nd aggy romantic, cute nd hot scenes as u were too focused on the storyline nd suddenly it's a time skip so I couldn't see much more of them just my pov authy otherwise I liked the storyline just feel like didn't get enough time of ml nd fl but rather they were engaged with issues nd problems nd other family members.... also I hv full faith in u and also this is positive criticism I don't hate any of ur storyline or whatsoever Infact every morning I first check my phone in order to see if it's updated or not nd if not I don't read anything else further 🤷♀️ yours lovely sweet supporter
2026-03-06
2
Star
change his name how can you keep villian name for him also who gave trauma to fl
2026-03-05
5
sapphire
also authy I suggest u make another chat story for their children's storyline so that it will be neat nd easier for one to find if someone like me wants to re read ur work because it's way easier I hope u take this suggestion into consideration 😆 nd I m excited for the second season
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sapphire
Dear Author
I m looking forward to their storyline nd I really hope that in this story u focus more on sweet moments of the upcoming ml nd fl along with the story plot I really felt like there weren't much chahat nd aggy romantic, cute nd hot scenes as u were too focused on the storyline nd suddenly it's a time skip so I couldn't see much more of them just my pov authy otherwise I liked the storyline just feel like didn't get enough time of ml nd fl but rather they were engaged with issues nd problems nd other family members.... also I hv full faith in u and also this is positive criticism I don't hate any of ur storyline or whatsoever Infact every morning I first check my phone in order to see if it's updated or not nd if not I don't read anything else further 🤷♀️
yours lovely
sweet supporter
2026-03-06
2
Star
change his name how can you keep villian name for him also who gave trauma to fl
2026-03-05
5
sapphire
also authy I suggest u make another chat story for their children's storyline so that it will be neat nd easier for one to find if someone like me wants to re read ur work because it's way easier I hope u take this suggestion into consideration 😆 nd I m excited for the second season
2026-03-06
1