authy the story is going on amazing but just a suggestion jo tum boxes mein bta rahe ho like what the ML is doing or whatever the situation is....write them in simple present or better simple past. but it will still be okay if you continue like that and the story plot is very nice. I liked it. all the best 😄
2025-12-14
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Vijay Shalini Dubey
WOW IT IS VERY GOOD STORY, THE Plot IS INTERESTING, LOOKING FORWARD, PLEASE GIVE CRAZY UPDATES, IT WILL BE Hype IF YOU DON'T STOP WRITING, 🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️
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Moon
authy the story is going on amazing but just a suggestion jo tum boxes mein bta rahe ho like what the ML is doing or whatever the situation is....write them in simple present or better simple past.
but it will still be okay if you continue like that and the story plot is very nice. I liked it. all the best 😄
2025-12-14
1
Vijay Shalini Dubey
WOW IT IS VERY GOOD STORY, THE Plot IS INTERESTING, LOOKING FORWARD, PLEASE GIVE CRAZY UPDATES, IT WILL BE Hype IF YOU DON'T STOP WRITING, 🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️
2025-12-14
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Faaz Farooq
song name?
2026-04-03
0