authyuu the thing I am liking the most in this story is that the way u are balancing the fictional and reality both because as a reader and as a writer most people prefer to leave the reality and just be in their fictional world but u are balancing the story very well good job I loved this thing about u it is fictional too because in real life it is really hard to find a partner who see your pov too and try to support u and care and love for like our mls are doing in the story 🙂💗
2026-04-25
21
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author ur story is very realistic and each and every word u write really hit my heart man the only thing I feel bad is the updates. i really have to wait for ur updates for whole day. i know update is good but once or twice a week u can give 2 update author.
2026-04-25
2
Jiya
the more struggle you both face.. the more your love blooms.. don't worry.. mahi is with you.. that's what matters ❤️
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kriti
authyuu the thing I am liking the most in this story is that the way u are balancing the fictional and reality both because as a reader and as a writer most people prefer to leave the reality and just be in their fictional world but u are balancing the story very well good job I loved this thing about u it is fictional too because in real life it is really hard to find a partner who see your pov too and try to support u and care and love for like our mls are doing in the story 🙂💗
2026-04-25
21
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author ur story is very realistic and each and every word u write really hit my heart man the only thing I feel bad is the updates. i really have to wait for ur updates for whole day. i know update is good but once or twice a week u can give 2 update author.
2026-04-25
2
Jiya
the more struggle you both face.. the more your love blooms.. don't worry.. mahi is with you.. that's what matters ❤️
2026-04-25
6