authyuu the thing I am liking the most in this story is that the way u are balancing the fictional and reality both because as a reader and as a writer most people prefer to leave the reality and just be in their fictional world but u are balancing the story very well good job I loved this thing about u it is fictional too because in real life it is really hard to find a partner who see your pov too and try to support u and care and love for like our mls are doing in the story 🙂💗
2026-04-25
21
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author ur story is very realistic and each and every word u write really hit my heart man the only thing I feel bad is the updates. i really have to wait for ur updates for whole day. i know update is good but once or twice a week u can give 2 update author.
2026-04-25
2
kriti
yahi hota hai ache or saaf man ke log humesa apne sath sath dusre ke pov ko bhi jaane ki kosis karte hai wo sabko heal karte hai protect karte or last mei khud ke liye akele ho jaate hai agar khudko heal karte hai to fhir se hurt ho jaate hai or ye cycle chalte rahta hai 🙂
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kriti
authyuu the thing I am liking the most in this story is that the way u are balancing the fictional and reality both because as a reader and as a writer most people prefer to leave the reality and just be in their fictional world but u are balancing the story very well good job I loved this thing about u it is fictional too because in real life it is really hard to find a partner who see your pov too and try to support u and care and love for like our mls are doing in the story 🙂💗
2026-04-25
21
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author ur story is very realistic and each and every word u write really hit my heart man the only thing I feel bad is the updates. i really have to wait for ur updates for whole day. i know update is good but once or twice a week u can give 2 update author.
2026-04-25
2
kriti
yahi hota hai ache or saaf man ke log humesa apne sath sath dusre ke pov ko bhi jaane ki kosis karte hai wo sabko heal karte hai protect karte or last mei khud ke liye akele ho jaate hai agar khudko heal karte hai to fhir se hurt ho jaate hai or ye cycle chalte rahta hai 🙂
2026-04-25
3