okay... I dunno how to feel about this. This is clearly a Zero to Hero story, but since it seems to be "realistic", it might be a Zero to Hero to Zero story... The mc. We kinda know nothing about her character. Something that should be explained in the first chapter. I do have a lot of questions which is a good thing. The story seems to be a blend of dark fantasy and science fiction. Use less images to improve your descritive writing. Alas, clarity is better than creativity. He sure to remember that. 6.5/10 . It may go up as the story progresses
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Mellord 🌸🎶
okay... I dunno how to feel about this. This is clearly a Zero to Hero story, but since it seems to be "realistic", it might be a Zero to Hero to Zero story... The mc. We kinda know nothing about her character. Something that should be explained in the first chapter. I do have a lot of questions which is a good thing. The story seems to be a blend of dark fantasy and science fiction. Use less images to improve your descritive writing. Alas, clarity is better than creativity. He sure to remember that. 6.5/10 . It may go up as the story progresses
2026-01-13
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