The Portal of the Dragon God
The sky clear as it should be where birds hummed their songs, and the petals falling from the tree by the winds breeze.
Three figures, two males and a female walking together to start a new journey.
Miku : the wind is blowing perfectly today. (Cheerful).
Kazuha: the weather is perfect, just as usual. (bored).
Hiroshi : the weather is perfect but don't make it to boring. (cheerful).
The three chatted while walking to their destination which is the school. Soon they arrive at their class.
Mr hiroku : alright class, settle down, we have some new students so greet them with kindness. (calm and gentle)
Miku : hello ! My name is Miku, and it's a pleasure to meet you all. (excited).
Kazuha : greetings everyone, my name is Kazuha or you call me KAZ. (calm).
Hiroshi : sup ! My name is Hiroshi, it's a pleasure to meet you all. Let's get fired up ! (hyped)
The class was happy and excited about this semester cause of the new trio. Mr Hikaru requested the trio to take their seat. (gently).
Miku : Everything is just fine for now. (calm)
Kazuha: Yup ... of course...just perfect. (calm)
Hiroshi : yeah just perfect to be ruined. ( calm)
After some hours, they had fun and learned some things which they didn't know. They read, played, etc. it was the end of class.
Miku : that was fun and exciting ... so ready for tomorrow. ( happy ).
Kazuha: that was fun .... I suppose ( calm )
Hiroshi: that was amazing and fun! ( cheerful).
As they were walking in the streets, and it was dark and silent because it was 7 pm in the night.
Miku : why is it so silent! Its creepy (scared).
Kazuha: it's just dark not creepy (calm)
Hiroshi: it's not that creepy (calm)
Miku : how are you guys not scared ?! ( concerned).
Kazuha and Hiroshi: experience ( calm )
Miku : what ! (shocked and concerned).
As they walk through the streets, a strange hum began to be heard. It's sounded quite beautiful but strange at the same time.
Miku : what was that ?! (scared).
Kazuha : what in the world is happening right now! (worried).
Hiroshi: I think we are in trouble (scared).
As the hum became louder, a strange figure appeared which has thorns around its head also roses like a crown. It had a rose jewelry and had a flourish patterns around its clothes.
Figure: Greetings! Young ones, I am here to curse you bye see you some day or not ! (wickedly).
As the figure spoke those words, a dragon shaped portal appeared behind them and pulled them inside.
Miku : Ahh ! Why are we falling?! (panicking).
Kazuha: what in the world are we getting cursed by an old woman or .... I don't know (Annoyed).
Hiroshi: I hate heights ... Ahh ! I hate being cursed by some granny.... I hate life. (scared)
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Narrator: on the next chapter, kazuha ends up in a forest which he encounters with a monster that gives him super power to save the world from evil.
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Comments
Mellord 🌸🎶
A lot of... stuff happening to the characters and the characters doin' nothing. A lot of us NOT seeing what makes each character unique besides their name. HOLY COW, Wha do you mean? THIS IS JUST A NORMAL DAY!!! Start at chaos to engage the reader. I would've liked it more if you started the story with the characters falling from the sky, then we learn wassup. 4/10. sorry man. Just nothing THAT engaging. I might not even pick up the second chapter. If you wanna improve, read and analyse Tears in snow, Zendra, or Rift to Kalama from @Kathir Velan . You still have a long way to go
2026-01-20
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