author, your story is very good....but the pace is very slow....you see, in spite of giving regular updates, I somehow feel disconnected to this story because things are not getting disclosed.
pls, don't do that....I love your story and don't want to leave it...pls make some progress with fl emotions.....
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author, your story is very good....but the pace is very slow....you see, in spite of giving regular updates, I somehow feel disconnected to this story because things are not getting disclosed.
pls, don't do that....I love your story and don't want to leave it...pls make some progress with fl emotions.....
it's just a suggestion, i hope you don't mind
2026-03-02
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Anjali Singh
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2026-03-24
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