author can try to change your writing style....like don't write "I did that"," I pulled into a hug" it is very confusing and the emotions are also not working to the right.... instead try to write into third person pov like "tae did like that " "v pulled tae into a hug" and try to use the conversation part only in charcters pov(like tae: what are you doing ) don't use actions parts are in characters pov like tae : I did that or like that....your story is good but you should improve how you write ....hop you understand....so you will get more readers ....
2026-03-03
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Jenny velvet
I guess there is definitely a reason behind tae, s fault. and I'm clearly seeing the manipulations in jk and v, s eyes.
2026-03-22
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midnight dreamer (◍•ᴗ•◍)
I know tae did something in past but it's future I feel sorry for tae
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lovely
author can try to change your writing style....like don't write "I did that"," I pulled into a hug" it is very confusing and the emotions are also not working to the right.... instead try to write into third person pov like "tae did like that " "v pulled tae into a hug" and try to use the conversation part only in charcters pov(like tae: what are you doing ) don't use actions parts are in characters pov like tae : I did that or like that....your story is good but you should improve how you write ....hop you understand....so you will get more readers ....
2026-03-03
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Jenny velvet
I guess there is definitely a reason behind tae, s fault. and I'm clearly seeing the manipulations in jk and v, s eyes.
2026-03-22
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midnight dreamer (◍•ᴗ•◍)
I know tae did something in past but it's future I feel sorry for tae
2026-03-02
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