Hii author, this is my first comment on your story. I just found this story two or three days back and I was just waiting to reach it final chapter so that I can share my pov. Overall story planning till now is great and I love it!!! but having 4MLs is something I find kinda uncomfortable. Many people are supporting yuv and even I am supporting him too but those three being mls is not looking good especially suraj. I mean what's the point of showing sisterhood till now when you are just going to end up with your sister's ex. I personally support yuv because he cares, listen to her, no doubt he also has some red flag but atleast he will never hurt her and also if they end up together they will have no past memories to feel guilty over (which other MLs will feel and it will spoil the mood). Rest I just want you to think carefully and do what you feel right because in the end it's your story your plot lining. (Also if we change the genders and keep one ml and 4 fls then all these people who are supporting this will come after ml to eat him alive) (my personal opinion think from everyone's pov)
2026-04-24
10
Xoxo_Nikki
If you are going to do this... I'm not gonna read your story...Cuz from the first day I'm saying I want yuv.. And not only me but many others also want yuv... And if you are not gonna consider our emotions then bro sorry i will not read the story... I think the journey was still this only... Bye
2026-04-21
7
Sadiya
Hey I really like your story idea and the whole revenge angle its interesting I know youve decided on four MLs and I respect that I just wanted to share my perspective maybe you could focus more on the MLs who actually add value to the story and arent too rude or forced so the emotions feel more real and the readers can connect better But of course its your story and Im excited to see how you develop it 😊
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Delilah
Hii author, this is my first comment on your story. I just found this story two or three days back and I was just waiting to reach it final chapter so that I can share my pov. Overall story planning till now is great and I love it!!! but having 4MLs is something I find kinda uncomfortable. Many people are supporting yuv and even I am supporting him too but those three being mls is not looking good especially suraj. I mean what's the point of showing sisterhood till now when you are just going to end up with your sister's ex. I personally support yuv because he cares, listen to her, no doubt he also has some red flag but atleast he will never hurt her and also if they end up together they will have no past memories to feel guilty over (which other MLs will feel and it will spoil the mood). Rest I just want you to think carefully and do what you feel right because in the end it's your story your plot lining. (Also if we change the genders and keep one ml and 4 fls then all these people who are supporting this will come after ml to eat him alive) (my personal opinion think from everyone's pov)
2026-04-24
10
Xoxo_Nikki
If you are going to do this... I'm not gonna read your story...Cuz from the first day I'm saying I want yuv.. And not only me but many others also want yuv... And if you are not gonna consider our emotions then bro sorry i will not read the story... I think the journey was still this only... Bye
2026-04-21
7
Sadiya
Hey I really like your story idea and the whole revenge angle its interesting I know youve decided on four MLs and I respect that I just wanted to share my perspective maybe you could focus more on the MLs who actually add value to the story and arent too rude or forced so the emotions feel more real and the readers can connect better But of course its your story and Im excited to see how you develop it 😊
2026-04-21
6