hey author this story is really amazing and I really like the way it buildsup curiosity in every chapter. My small suggestion is that too many unknowns is too confusing. please reveal previous unknown before bringing up the new one. U may skip it if you feel this is off from the way you want to execute ur plot. Thankyou
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Apoorva A
hey author this story is really amazing and I really like the way it buildsup curiosity in every chapter. My small suggestion is that too many unknowns is too confusing. please reveal previous unknown before bringing up the new one. U may skip it if you feel this is off from the way you want to execute ur plot. Thankyou
2026-06-13
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Nxy_🖤🌚
now who's this?????? 😭😭😭
2026-05-26
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Nxy_🖤🌚
arreyyy???? 😭😭😭😭
2026-05-26
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