Ugh!!!! This idiot... Why the h*ll did you leave from there Ren? You should have just quietly stayed there or maybe just forcefully hugged him, apologised and begged him to listen to you. Now the acr of misunderstanding will widen.(Not that I am complaining 😌, I like these stubborn people on their knees.) Anyways you deserve whatever is coming your way now for being stupid and silly here. 🤦🏻♀️
Also, I like the chemistry going on between MC and ML too much. They are so sweet. ✨✨✨ I would also like you, Author, to add a few scenes for Evan too. I wanna see his story proceed further.
Also, Author, I have a suggestion. I would like it if you use less of the emojis and more of *being shy*, *getting angry*... like these cause' this gives us, readers, more to imagine about their reactions. ( Also, I am not saying you should completely not involve the emojis. You should but only a little tiny bit less.)
And if you would like to do it your way I won't mind that either because I know every writer has his/ her own creative way of writing. All in all the chapters are great.✨✨✨
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Ugh!!!! This idiot... Why the h*ll did you leave from there Ren? You should have just quietly stayed there or maybe just forcefully hugged him, apologised and begged him to listen to you. Now the acr of misunderstanding will widen.(Not that I am complaining 😌, I like these stubborn people on their knees.) Anyways you deserve whatever is coming your way now for being stupid and silly here. 🤦🏻♀️
Also, I like the chemistry going on between MC and ML too much. They are so sweet. ✨✨✨
I would also like you, Author, to add a few scenes for Evan too. I wanna see his story proceed further.
Also, Author, I have a suggestion. I would like it if you use less of the emojis and more of *being shy*, *getting angry*... like these cause' this gives us, readers, more to imagine about their reactions. ( Also, I am not saying you should completely not involve the emojis. You should but only a little tiny bit less.)
And if you would like to do it your way I won't mind that either because I know every writer has his/ her own creative way of writing.
All in all the chapters are great.✨✨✨
2026-07-23
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