Update fast Author, also can you write each character's action and monologue separately, when you write in middle box, the dialogues tangle and get confusing, I have been texting this issue from beginning of the chapters but you never noticed. Also hope you add more dialogue and conversation between other ML's with MC. Since many in between chapters it's either Second ML overshadowing other two ML's, especially First ML who only reacts when he is jealous, or angry. It would be nice if you give mini prologue of other MLS too, because more the communication will strengthen the bond with MLS and MC. Also I wanna see cute moments of MLS, like their mistakes or shyness or embarrassment while MC teach them about his modern methods. Also try to add few symbols or signs to differentiate which are actions and which are thoughts like 🗯️💭. That's all overall great plot and urs is better than other ppls beastmens story. /Smile/
2026-04-06
3
Saambavi V
author i just love ur work sooooommuch. keep it up!!!😎
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Anamitra Kaizen
Update fast Author, also can you write each character's action and monologue separately, when you write in middle box, the dialogues tangle and get confusing, I have been texting this issue from beginning of the chapters but you never noticed. Also hope you add more dialogue and conversation between other ML's with MC. Since many in between chapters it's either Second ML overshadowing other two ML's, especially First ML who only reacts when he is jealous, or angry. It would be nice if you give mini prologue of other MLS too, because more the communication will strengthen the bond with MLS and MC. Also I wanna see cute moments of MLS, like their mistakes or shyness or embarrassment while MC teach them about his modern methods. Also try to add few symbols or signs to differentiate which are actions and which are thoughts like 🗯️💭. That's all overall great plot and urs is better than other ppls beastmens story. /Smile/
2026-04-06
3
Saambavi V
author i just love ur work sooooommuch. keep it up!!!😎
2026-04-05
2
Li cheng⌁𝓜̽⌁
beautiful work👍/Casual/
2026-04-06
2