to tell you truth the writing style changed a little bit it's perfect...the story authenticity and should of the chapter can be seen..before I couldn't see it properly...please write this way from now on author....honest constructive criticism....i hope I am not offending you
2026-07-13
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geet
Throughout the whole story I always suspect that kook is listens to tae thoughts 🤔
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tataaa
to tell you truth the writing style changed a little bit it's perfect...the story authenticity and should of the chapter can be seen..before I couldn't see it properly...please write this way from now on author....honest constructive criticism....i hope I am not offending you
2026-07-13
2
geet
Throughout the whole story I always suspect that kook is listens to tae thoughts 🤔
2026-07-27
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NobOdY AsKeU~
just for you~~~~🤭💗
2026-07-14
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