I m sorry take it as a positive criticism or something but why are u mixing so many plots in one story ... transmigration, system, amnesia, gossip ...it's like a khichdi deviating from the plot ... characters like wojin n all going missing..no actual convo is happening...only photos nd stickers...I mean they are funny .. don't stop them but don't make the story khichdi atleast...too many things are happening at once without any actual concept...also it appears like u are writing whatever is coming to yr mind nd u don't have a basic frame ready ... nd pls this is in no way a hate comment
2026-07-25
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author i just love your choice of pictures 😂😂😂 best (✯ᴗ✯)
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taekook7
I m sorry take it
as a positive criticism or something
but why are u mixing so many plots in one story ... transmigration, system, amnesia, gossip ...it's like a khichdi deviating from the plot ... characters like wojin n all going missing..no actual convo is happening...only photos nd stickers...I mean they are funny .. don't stop them but don't make the story khichdi atleast...too many things are happening at once without any actual concept...also it appears like u are writing whatever is coming to yr mind nd u don't have a basic frame ready ... nd pls this is in no way a hate comment
2026-07-25
1
author i just love your choice of pictures 😂😂😂 best (✯ᴗ✯)
2026-03-15
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~Hot mommy 🔥~
i know kookie plan will back fire him 🤣
2026-03-15
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