It's great but lacking character vibes, you tried your best, that's what matters, being an author is complicated after all...and also, please check out my own novel, chapter 5 will be release soon
2026-03-19
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★ᴄ͢͢͢ʀɪᴍɪɴᴀʟ ɴᴀᴇᴠɪꜱ ⁶⁶⁶★
Too... its too old! There wouldn't be a concept of touch phone common at that time I guess...
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{私は}Itoshi Kazuto ✓
It's great but lacking character vibes, you tried your best, that's what matters, being an author is complicated after all...and also, please check out my own novel, chapter 5 will be release soon
2026-03-19
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★ᴄ͢͢͢ʀɪᴍɪɴᴀʟ ɴᴀᴇᴠɪꜱ ⁶⁶⁶★
Too... its too old! There wouldn't be a concept of touch phone common at that time I guess...
2026-02-27
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★ᴄ͢͢͢ʀɪᴍɪɴᴀʟ ɴᴀᴇᴠɪꜱ ⁶⁶⁶★
What does that mean?
2026-02-27
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