mm what I think you should improve is give more information about the characters and show some more emotions and you should take the story lil fast cause we are stuck in the school trip chap itself and you are giving hints about mc past and all and your story is good , don't compare yourself with others ,keep going authy 😘😁 . If I said something hurtful sorry 😞😥
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mm what I think you should improve is give more information about the characters and show some more emotions and you should take the story lil fast cause we are stuck in the school trip chap itself and you are giving hints about mc past and all and your story is good , don't compare yourself with others ,keep going authy 😘😁 . If I said something hurtful sorry 😞😥
2026-06-06
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