no offence...I like the story but from my reader's pov it's getting boring...u are stretching the same sentence many times also the comic delivery is bit out of place .. because every character has the same repetitive lines or action...take it as a necessary nd positive criticism..I m not asking for a fight 💌
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taekook7
no offence...I like the story but from my reader's pov it's getting boring...u are stretching the same sentence many times also the comic delivery is bit out of place .. because every character has the same repetitive lines or action...take it as a necessary nd positive criticism..I m not asking for a fight 💌
2026-05-04
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yoonjay
yeah he was just focused on his goal/CoolGuy/
2026-05-03
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yoonjay
No Idea may be he's going to purpose him🥰
2026-05-03
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