Your story is going smoothly. I am not finding any faults. It's beautiful. ✨✨✨ And in my opinion your pace is right too. Dudu suffers from a psychological problem not any normal one so it needs time and patience, I like how you are not rushing it and suddenly saying,"Oh! dudu is well now!" . That will be more disappointing. I like how you are making it feel real and true. ✨✨✨ Also, I literally cried hearing the back story, Author. You are so cruel. 🥲 The back story just broke my heart into millions of pieces, dudu was just so innocent...😭 it gave me tears in my eyes reading it. And the fact that as soon as I tried to hold myself together the next chapter will just break me as much as the earlier one was so unfair. 😭But seriously your story is h*lla good! Great job! ✨✨✨
And also focus on your exams if you have to i have no issues with that, studies are important too. ☺️ All the best for the exams! ✨✨✨
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Your story is going smoothly. I am not finding any faults. It's beautiful. ✨✨✨
And in my opinion your pace is right too. Dudu suffers from a psychological problem not any normal one so it needs time and patience, I like how you are not rushing it and suddenly saying,"Oh! dudu is well now!" . That will be more disappointing. I like how you are making it feel real and true. ✨✨✨
Also, I literally cried hearing the back story, Author. You are so cruel. 🥲 The back story just broke my heart into millions of pieces, dudu was just so innocent...😭 it gave me tears in my eyes reading it. And the fact that as soon as I tried to hold myself together the next chapter will just break me as much as the earlier one was so unfair. 😭But seriously your story is h*lla good! Great job! ✨✨✨
And also focus on your exams if you have to i have no issues with that, studies are important too. ☺️ All the best for the exams! ✨✨✨
2026-07-07
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