The Door That Knocks Back
The knocking started at exactly 12:07 AM.
Not loud.
Not urgent.
Just… patient.
Knock.
A pause.
Knock. Knock.
Rohan opened his eyes slowly, staring at the ceiling. For a few seconds, he didn’t move. His brain tried to place the sound somewhere normal—maybe a neighbor, maybe pipes, maybe a dream.
Then it came again.
Knock.
A pause.
Knock. Knock.
From his door.
Rohan frowned, pushing himself up on his elbows. His room was dark except for the faint blue glow of his phone screen on the table. He checked the time.
12:07 AM.
“Who even…” he muttered.
He lived alone. And no one visited him this late—not here, not in this quiet building where everyone minded their own business.
The knocking came again.
Same rhythm.
Too precise.
Too… deliberate.
Rohan swung his legs off the bed and stood up. The floor felt colder than usual.
“Coming,” he called out, his voice slightly unsure.
The knocking stopped instantly.
That should’ve been his warning.
He walked toward the door slowly, each step heavier than the last. Something felt off—not dangerous exactly, just… wrong. Like a sentence that almost made sense but didn’t.
He reached for the handle.
And paused.
On the other side, there was no sound. No shifting. No footsteps. No breathing.
Just silence.
Rohan leaned closer to the door, his ear almost touching the wood.
“Hello?” he said softly.
Nothing.
He let out a breath, half-annoyed now. “If this is some kind of joke—”
A voice interrupted him.
From the other side.
Low. Calm.
And exactly like his own.
“Open the door, Rohan.”
He froze.
Every muscle in his body locked.
“…What?”
Silence.
Then again—
“Open the door.”
Same voice.
Same tone.
His voice.
Rohan stepped back slowly, his heart beginning to race. “Who is that?”
No answer.
Just that same quiet stillness.
His eyes dropped to the bottom of the door.
There was a gap—just enough space to see the faint shadow of whoever stood outside.
Except…
There were two shadows.
One standing normally.
The other… slightly behind.
But moving when the first didn’t.
Rohan’s breath hitched.
“That’s not funny,” he said, though his voice trembled now.
The voice on the other side sighed.
Impatient.
“You’re making this difficult.”
The handle moved.
Just a little.
A soft click.
Rohan jumped back, his mind scrambling.
“I locked it,” he whispered. “I know I locked it.”
The handle stopped moving.
Then—
Knock.
This time from the inside of the door.
Rohan stared at it in horror.
Knock. Knock.
From his side.
Like something was already in the room with him.
“No…” he breathed.
The voice came again.
But now it wasn’t just from the other side.
It was everywhere.
Behind him.
Beside him.
Inside his head.
“We don’t like waiting.”
Rohan spun around.
The room was empty.
But the air felt crowded.
Heavy.
Watching.
“You should have opened the door,” the voice whispered.
Something shifted near the corner of the room.
Rohan’s eyes snapped toward it.
At first, there was nothing.
Then—
A shape.
Dark.
Too dark.
Darker than the shadows around it.
It peeled itself away from the corner like it had been hiding there the whole time.
And slowly—
It stood up.
It had his height.
His build.
His outline.
But no face.
Just a blank, shifting darkness where features should be.
Rohan stumbled backward, his legs hitting the bed.
“No, no, no—this isn’t real—”
The thing tilted its head.
Listening.
Learning.
Then—
Its face began to form.
Not fully.
Just enough.
Eyes.
A mouth.
A reflection of him.
“You took too long,” it said softly.
In his voice.
Rohan shook his head violently. “Stay away from me!”
The thing stepped forward.
Once.
Twice.
Each movement slow, controlled.
Like it wasn’t in a hurry anymore.
“You heard us,” it continued. “We asked nicely.”
Rohan’s hand fumbled blindly across the table, searching for anything—his phone, something to throw, something to fight with.
His fingers closed around nothing.
When he looked back—
The thing was closer.
Too close.
“You always answer,” it whispered.
It raised its hand.
Mirroring him.
Exactly.
Perfectly.
Rohan realized something then.
Something cold and final.
It wasn’t copying him.
He was copying it.
Every movement he made—
It had already decided.
“Please…” Rohan whispered.
The thing smiled.
Wider than any human should.
Then it stepped forward—
And the lights went out.
The next morning, the neighbors complained about the noise.
A door left open.
A faint knocking sound that had continued long after midnight.
When the landlord came to check, the apartment was empty.
No signs of struggle.
No broken locks.
Nothing missing.
Except Rohan.
The door, however, had something new.
On the inside.
Faint marks.
Three of them.
Like someone had tried to knock their way out.
Knock.
A pause.
Knock. Knock.
And if anyone stood too close—
They might hear it again.
Waiting patiently.
For someone else to answer.
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