CHAPTER FOUR

Akankshya❤️❤️

i will not lie but this chapter was lousy compared to the other 3 chapters...like i couldn't see your signature style in it , which binds the readers to the story and to wait for the next chapter... i couldn't figure it out but something was missing.... i should not say this here but also the other story " the villainess wants to be alone" recent chapter was also kind of dull
like in that chapter you could have explained more about the thoughts of the FL when she got to know that date can't be changed rather than emphasizing on the kidnappers also the other 3 characters screen time was also low......😕.....and in this also that's the problem I think
you should first focus on the important character the supporting ones ..... also try to add their thoughts as much as possible
if possible everyone's thoughts so that readers will feel the story...and also add some background songs 😀..... lastly I am sorry if I offended you 🥺