i really love the fact that u tried to incorporate the details I feel so proud of yuh 🥺👍.
but
u need to improve the story is all about them hiding their secret rn but if u could add some world building and character growth it will be ABSOLUTE CINEMA 👍
2026-05-23
1
kiki 🥀🐛
see it set the mood the reader can now imagine the rest
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kiki 🥀🐛
i really love the fact that u tried to incorporate the details I feel so proud of yuh 🥺👍.
but
u need to improve the story is all about them hiding their secret rn but if u could add some world building and character growth it will be
ABSOLUTE CINEMA 👍
2026-05-23
1
kiki 🥀🐛
see it set the mood the reader can now imagine the rest
2026-05-23
1