i love how you made the ML have feeling because so always pull apoke face and cold shoulders and like you say leander wait and watch him far aways other would come and take him without consent also the guilt of pregnancy it shows his love him so much not only obsession and control, those characters are well written waiting fot the next update 😉
2026-06-25
3
𝙽𝚘𝚝 𝚊𝚟𝚊𝚒𝚕𝚊𝚋𝚕𝚎....
authy your story just like how i want a story to be, actually what feels empty is ml doesn't get more screen, actually he doesn't need to be with nevan but he should be there... not always just idk how to say you understand wht i mean right 👀
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Chelsy
i love how you made the ML have feeling because so always pull apoke face and cold shoulders and like you say leander wait and watch him far aways other would come and take him without consent also the guilt of pregnancy it shows his love him so much not only obsession and control, those characters are well written waiting fot the next update 😉
2026-06-25
3
𝙽𝚘𝚝 𝚊𝚟𝚊𝚒𝚕𝚊𝚋𝚕𝚎....
authy your story just like how i want a story to be, actually what feels empty is ml doesn't get more screen, actually he doesn't need to be with nevan but he should be there... not always just idk how to say you understand wht i mean right 👀
2026-06-28
2