good but the part where you describe feelings, action and place is too congested making it hard to understand and read especially the first few chapters
2026-06-01
2
sunshine🎀✨baby
So good...😆✋.. Keep it up authyyy
2026-05-10
1
tae☕kookie 🍪world 🌍
nice story please don't stop in middle....update soon
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Beatha Okoye
good but the part where you describe feelings, action and place is too congested making it hard to understand and read especially the first few chapters
2026-06-01
2
sunshine🎀✨baby
So good...😆✋..
Keep it up authyyy
2026-05-10
1
tae☕kookie 🍪world 🌍
nice story please don't stop in middle....update soon
2026-05-17
1