so far the story is good/Smile/, the only problem I have is the your repeating the chapter, the words might not be same but the emotions and the charcter line are very much simpler to the last chapters try not to repeat. the writing skills is 9/10 i really like the story please don't lose motivation to write /Determined//Determined/
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spoliedstar
so far the story is good/Smile/, the only problem I have is the your repeating the chapter, the words might not be same but the emotions and the charcter line are very much simpler to the last chapters try not to repeat. the writing skills is 9/10 i really like the story please don't lose motivation to write /Determined//Determined/
2026-05-31
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