and author don't worrry, everyone has his or her own difficulties so just write the story as you can. just don't force yourself 😊
2020-12-21
5
Helisa
I think the story can go by...like🤔...Ace's has started to like Damien, so when they go back to meet his sister they see something unusual 😕and suddenly Ace remember about his family 🙁and what happened in the past. then he started to investigate it and Damien also helps him with his friends. and when the find that guy Damien also got something about his lost father and murdered mother 😠(maybe it's that man who locked Ace's mother and hurt his father).🤫
and maybe another twist😜, that when they found his mother and trying to get her and kill that man, Ace saw his father too and they three got together.😊 Damien also met his father and after revenge they returned home with a complete family.😄😄 of course Ace's sister and his friends and Damien's friends were also helping all along.😙
And if possible then they had a good ending with their parent's approval😁
So, how do you like this structure author 😗. of course there should be romance and 🔞🔞🔞 parts too but this structure can also make it interesting.
So author if you consider my choice then Thank you so much in advance but if not then it's ok, because we still like your story as it is now based upon your ideas😊
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Cantuba Nelros
oh... that is good idea date in beach
2023-07-05
0
Helisa
and author don't worrry, everyone has his or her own difficulties so just write the story as you can. just don't force yourself 😊
2020-12-21
5
Helisa
I think the story can go by...like🤔...Ace's has started to like Damien, so when they go back to meet his sister they see something unusual 😕and suddenly Ace remember about his family 🙁and what happened in the past. then he started to investigate it and Damien also helps him with his friends. and when the find that guy Damien also got something about his lost father and murdered mother 😠(maybe it's that man who locked Ace's mother and hurt his father).🤫
and maybe another twist😜, that when they found his mother and trying to get her and kill that man, Ace saw his father too and they three got together.😊 Damien also met his father and after revenge they returned home with a complete family.😄😄
of course Ace's sister and his friends and Damien's friends were also helping all along.😙
And if possible then they had a good ending with their parent's approval😁
So, how do you like this structure author 😗. of course there should be romance and 🔞🔞🔞 parts too but this structure can also make it interesting.
So author if you consider my choice then Thank you so much in advance but if not then it's ok, because we still like your story as it is now based upon your ideas😊
2020-12-21
5