I'm not the genre to criticize you but a whole 5 chapters without the actual meeting is too much....sometimes we don't need to drag too much for suspense we are already at this point of the story so don't need too much details between each actual scene and dialogue 💖
2026-07-02
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BTS FOREVER💜💜(◕ᴗ◕✿)
I think you guys don't want a lot of details, So just decided gonna take it a bit fast. 🙂🙂.
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Venizia
I'm not the genre to criticize you but a whole 5 chapters without the actual meeting is too much....sometimes we don't need to drag too much for suspense we are already at this point of the story so don't need too much details between each actual scene and dialogue 💖
2026-07-02
2
BTS FOREVER💜💜(◕ᴗ◕✿)
I think you guys don't want a lot of details,
So just decided gonna take it a bit fast.
🙂🙂.
2026-07-02
1
Taekooker_283♥️
please update soon author 🙏😭
2026-07-02
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