your story is good, even the plot has potential .. But for me there is a problem, you're dragging their relationship too much, if it was because of Jungkook incompetence that his relationship got worse but in this case there is nothing wrong. That guy is a big fool , whose mind is clouded with negativity. He has inferiority complex and he doesn't love Jungkook.
loving someone means supporting them in their worst time, but he is someone who doesn't care about their partner only think about himself.
2026-07-15
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Jinnie's Taemi
he apologizes???? he apologizes???? My god girl, you just have a great talent in pulling legs don't you
2026-07-16
1
Jinnie's Taemi
Maybe, but he had no right talking to you like that baby.
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your story is good, even the plot has potential ..
But for me there is a problem, you're dragging their relationship too much, if it was because of Jungkook incompetence that his relationship got worse but in this case there is nothing wrong.
That guy is a big fool , whose mind is clouded with negativity.
He has inferiority complex and he doesn't love Jungkook.
loving someone means supporting them in their worst time, but he is someone who doesn't care about their partner only think about himself.
2026-07-15
2
Jinnie's Taemi
he apologizes???? he apologizes???? My god girl, you just have a great talent in pulling legs don't you
2026-07-16
1
Jinnie's Taemi
Maybe, but he had no right talking to you like that baby.
2026-07-16
1