review please!

hey guys please tell me you liked my story or not should i continue or just stop right here? is the content interesting? i am just a little bit insecure as its my very first time uploading a story...i am in my rookie writter era so please feel free to comment on my story and guide me if anything is wrong or misleading or is there any confusion!

lots of love 💌

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