personally a good beginning but if u could make sure to introduce characters with the flow or do a seprate intro after a set of charter let's say 5-6 have been added
2026-07-12
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Naomi
Damn dude!! Author u are good at story starting I mean u introduce the Ml and his family and MC and his family it was great I like the introduction and now I wonder what is going to happen next🙂
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kiki 🥀🐛
personally a good beginning but if u could make sure to introduce characters with the flow or do a seprate intro after a set of charter let's say 5-6 have been added
2026-07-12
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Naomi
Damn dude!! Author u are good at story starting I mean u introduce the Ml and his family and MC and his family it was great I like the introduction and now I wonder what is going to happen next🙂
2026-07-07
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Auora Aira
i just want to say one thing... Daddy 😌
2026-07-07
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