hey , well i like the story plot and all but i think u could do something more realistic , i didn't mean its bad but since u hav such a story sense which i do appreciate a lot and I , personally want it to go a hit so , in reality if a girl is saved by a guy ,i don't think she will get to know what happen that time unless the ML himself say it and abt the sum and all u could have added it in later episode thats after 2 epi as someone or let his brother himself say it and yeah , i hope you would take this mere fan of urs suggestion😋 and I know its just a story but its better to make it realistic so that u can attract more fans and u will go many plots to write urself... ❤❤
Comments
~swords~
hey , well i like the story plot and all but i think u could do something more realistic , i didn't mean its bad but since u hav such a story sense which i do appreciate a lot and I , personally want it to go a hit so , in reality if a girl is saved by a guy ,i don't think she will get to know what happen that time unless the ML himself say it and abt the sum and all u could have added it in later episode thats after 2 epi as someone or let his brother himself say it and yeah , i hope you would take this mere fan of urs suggestion😋 and I know its just a story but its better to make it realistic so that u can attract more fans and u will go many plots to write urself... ❤❤
2020-12-08
1
Chris Wallace
Yay.... Chris.....
2020-12-07
1
💖Qᵘᵉᵉⁿ ᵒᶠ ʰᵉᵃʳᵗˢ💖[Taken]👑
yay Chris came to save
2020-12-02
2