your writing skills are good, I like reading the story, it felt natural reading to this story 😊😊😊😜
2020-12-06
1
nini(◍•ᴗ•◍)
don't you think your characters are little bit younger and the grandfather OMG he can be my brother lol and your auntie is looking like a teenager !!!!
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Crazy joker
your writing skills are good, I like reading the story, it felt natural reading to this story 😊😊😊😜
2020-12-06
1
nini(◍•ᴗ•◍)
don't you think your characters are little bit younger and the grandfather OMG he can be my brother lol and your auntie is looking like a teenager !!!!
2020-11-27
1
Little Lily
UwU nice!!! Keep updating Author!
2020-11-26
2