this is the second time i read your masterpieces, it have improvement with the great storyline. but i will more enjoyable if you use simple sentence such as, i kill your mother and father, i kill your sister. u can use i kill your stupid parents and your lovely sister. i feel like sympathy but criticism.
2021-01-26
0
Yours truly UNKNOWN 💞
Wooooooow.....cooooooool...... Awesome author....this is great I think this is a rebirth story..... IDK....But you my full support All the best dear 👍
2020-12-28
1
Martha Taring
I can fell being betrayed by the one you trusted 😠😠😠btw author nice work keep it up and update soon😙😙😙
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Haruka Mirai _Caramel98
this is the second time i read your masterpieces, it have improvement with the great storyline. but i will more enjoyable if you use simple sentence such as, i kill your mother and father, i kill your sister. u can use i kill your stupid parents and your lovely sister. i feel like sympathy but criticism.
2021-01-26
0
Yours truly UNKNOWN 💞
Wooooooow.....cooooooool......
Awesome author....this is great
I think this is a rebirth story.....
IDK....But you my full support
All the best dear 👍
2020-12-28
1
Martha Taring
I can fell being betrayed by the one you trusted 😠😠😠btw author nice work keep it up and update soon😙😙😙
2020-12-13
5