I have to say your vocabulary is very strong...I found many new words here for me to learn...How you describe fl's thoughts were just awesome am become a fan of your writing style it's just so good!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
1
The story is goodddd! No errors whatsoever! The vocabulary used is good! New words make it even more interesting! Well Done! Will continue reading this story! Keep up the same spirit throughout! ~Readers from MTN Community
2021-01-11
1
AJ
The story is awesome. I don't see any flaws here. It's just it will be better if there is some other talks or actions in between the talks of only one person. Like the last... FL's pov or thoughts. It would have been good if there is any description or something. And everything else is perfect. Keep the good work author. ~Readers from Mtn community
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
I have to say your vocabulary is very strong...I found many new words here for me to learn...How you describe fl's thoughts were just awesome am become a fan of your writing style it's just so good!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
1
The story is goodddd! No errors whatsoever! The vocabulary used is good! New words make it even more interesting!
Well Done! Will continue reading this story! Keep up the same spirit throughout!
~Readers from MTN Community
2021-01-11
1
AJ
The story is awesome. I don't see any flaws here. It's just it will be better if there is some other talks or actions in between the talks of only one person. Like the last... FL's pov or thoughts. It would have been good if there is any description or something. And everything else is perfect. Keep the good work author.
~Readers from Mtn community
2021-01-11
1