Story is good...you have a good writing style...The prologue was good....But tge mistake you made is like The girl canon suddenly spoke from behind in chapter 2 but you didn't told us where did she come or was she sittinv there from before...This'll make the readers confused in reading so u should improve this mistake...
~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-15
1
AJ
Story is good. And i saw no grammatical errors too. The story line is going great. Especially the preview part. Keep the good work author.. ~Readers from Mtn community
2021-01-14
1
Love Comics 💜
I am in love with the story. The prologue was awesome. My Favourite character I haven't found it yet. And I hate that character Grace. Haha. In my point of view it's great. There are no grammatical mistakes. Overall love it.
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
Story is good...you have a good writing style...The prologue was good....But tge mistake you made is like The girl canon suddenly spoke from behind in chapter 2 but you didn't told us where did she come or was she sittinv there from before...This'll make the readers confused in reading so u should improve this mistake...
~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-15
1
AJ
Story is good. And i saw no grammatical errors too. The story line is going great. Especially the preview part. Keep the good work author..
~Readers from Mtn community
2021-01-14
1
Love Comics 💜
I am in love with the story. The prologue was awesome. My Favourite character I haven't found it yet. And I hate that character Grace. Haha. In my point of view it's great. There are no grammatical mistakes. Overall love it.
~Reader from MTN
2021-01-14
2