This is me Nao I'm just a kid who is like to play ☺but don't make fun of me to much.🤭 today is my first day at school so I don't have any friends now 😤 talking about why I leave my old school because I have to live on my own it happens like this... i make a big fight with the guys who bullying my bestfriend but when I fight I use all my strength so the guys that I fight with end up in the hospital 😞I feel bad for him 😁
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Takoda Talbert
A few pointers, 1. When creating a story of which others will read it's best to have a clearer picture of how the story will continue.2. I think you have some real talent, but you could of made this slightly longer by putting those paragraphs into smaller words. 3. Next time maybe try using more images to explain your story better.🤗Again Good luck, and enjoy your life as well as your Readers.
P.S. I'm gonna sub to see what else you make👍
2020-02-27
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